Katelyn

Hi Katelyn!
You have done so much work! I am impressed!! Your summaries are very detailed. Would you be able to go back over them and create a space between full stops and check that you have capital letters at the start of each sentence?

See you next week. Cheers Mel. Ps - if you want to move my comments to the bottom of your wiki then please do!

Little Red Riding Hood:
= the story is about this little girl named little red riding hood and she was loved by everyone mostly by her grandmother.She got her name (little red riding hood) from her grandmother because her grandmother gave her a silky red hooded coat and she wore it all the time and nothing else so she got the name little red riding hood.Her grandmother got very ill one day so red's mother sent her to go and give her grandmother some wine and a piece of cake before it got to hot.Her mother told her to walk nicely and quietly and to stay on the path because she could hurt herself.Red said to her mother that she will take great care so she set off and walk towards the woods she was walking on the path till she ran into a wolf she did not know what a wicked creature was so she wasnt aware they started to talk she told him where she was going and the wolf thought to himself she looks plump and good looking so he thought that he should follow her to her grandmothers house.Before red could get to her grandmothers house the wolf was already there he hade eaten her grandmother and was dressed in her clothes.Red knocked on the door and the wolf discised as her grandmother said poorly come in my dear she walked in and saw her grandmother lying in the bed (the wolf) she did not know that the wolf was discised as her grandmother she said = = = = oh! grandmother what big ears you have! = = all the better to see you with,my child was the reply = = = = 'but grandmother,what big eyes you have!' she said = = all the better to see you with my dear = = = = 'but grandmother,what large hands you have'! = = 'all the better to hug you with!' = = = = 'oh! but grandmother,what a terrible big mouth you have!' = = 'all the better to eat you with!" =

= he jump off the bed and ate little red when he was full he layed down on the bed and fell asleep.He was snoring very loud a woods man heard him snoring and relised that it wasnt reds grandmother so he walked in the house and saw the wolf asleep he relised that he hade eaten little red and her grandmother so he got some sissors and cut a few snips in his stomach and red and her grandmother jumped out alive the hunts man took off the wolfs skin and took it home with him.Reds grandmother ate the cake and drank the wine that red hade given her.Red thought to herself as long as i live i will never ever leave the path on my own and i will not talk to strangers.But it happened again when she was takeing more cakes to her grandmother and another wolf spoke to her but she keeped walking and was alarmed this time so she keeped walking to her grandmothers house and told her grandmother that another wolf hade talked to her the set up a plan to kill him and it worked after that they all lived happyley ever after and no one harmed her ever again. =

little red riding hood conve ntion language:english features and traditional writing purpose:to entertain.

__[|form]__:fairytale.

__style__:imaginative (made up).

moral of the story:to never talk to strangers and to do what __your mother__ tells you to.

= the hare and the tortoise: =

there was a hare and he thought that he was the fastest runner he boasted that he was faster than everyone else.There was also a tortoise.and the hare challenged the tortoise to a race to prove that he was faster.The tortoise eccepted the challenge because he was annoyed by all the bragging and boasting so he eccepted the challenge.The next day at dawn they stood at the starting line the hare yawned as the tortoise started to walk slowly.the hare saw how slow his rival was so he thought to him self half asleep on his feet that he would go and have a quick nap he said to the tortoise take your time.Soon after that the hare woke up after a fit full nap and gazed around looking for the tortoise he saw that the tortoise was not very far the hare sighed with relief and thought that he might as well eat breakfast to so he went off to munch on some cabbages.After a big meal he was so full and the hot sun was making his eyelids droop after seeing carelessly that the tortoise was half way through the course he decided to take another snooze before flashing past the finishing post.The suns rays were getting hotter the hare was fast asleep and the tortoise was plotting closer and closer to the finish line he was almost there at that very point the hare woke up with a jolt he could see the tortoise a speck in the distance and he soon dashed at a great rate.his tongue hanging out and he was gasping for breath but the tortoise bet him before he could make that last leap to the finish line.The hare all tired and slumped down and sad beside the tortoise who was silently smiling at him "slowly does it every time!" the tortoise said to the hare. And that was the end of there race. = the tortoise and the hare convention = language:simple and easy. purpose:to entertain

form:fairytale

style:old and made up

moral of the story: that if you take things nice and easy and if you are possitive about things you will win cause it doesent matter if your not fast you just have to take your time and do things slowly at your own pase and you could win because everybody is a winner!.

The tortoise and the hare a modern variation:
There was a tortoise named terry and a hare named jack they worked in the same office. Jack the hare was one of those good looking athletic sorts of fellows. He was always seen around town with a different lady friend. His desk was always tidy and clean and he bragged a lot about how he always finished his work before everybody else! and before there due date. He worked out at the gym a lot like every day and spent quite a lot of money on his clothes so that he would look neat good and tidy and so it would fit him perfectly.His teeth where capped and his hair was styled perfectly. He was also a bit of a joker he always had a new joke to tell people every day. And terry is a tortoise he is quite and shy. He wore thick kinda nerdy like glasses and usually looked rather rumpled. His desk was pretty messy it was covered with papers and junk no one ever saw him out in town because he always spent his lunch sitting at his desk but he was always polite and busy people always called him a geek or a nerd. One day jack asked terry lets have a race to see who is faster terry agreed so everyone came around to watch. Terry and jack lined up at the starting line and they took off after 1....2....3 and jack sprinted off while terry took it nice and slow. After a while jack got hungry so he stopped for food because he saw that terry was far behind so he had a big meal he felt sleepy so he went and had a nap. He woke up to look again to see if terry was any closer but from point of view terry was still walking slowly as ever then he yawned and thought that he should have another nap so he fell asleep with the suns hot rays he woke up in suprize to see that terry was really close to the finish line so he got up real fast and started running really fast and terry made it past the finish line just before jack did. Jack was so upset and terry said to jack "slow and steady wins the race ". = = = the tortoise and the hare modern variation convention: =

language:simple easy and fun for younger kids to read as well as older.

purpose: to entertain people of many ages but mostly kids possibly younger.

form: fairytale (made up)

style: kinda modern and easy to read great for younger kids!.

moral of this story: don't underestimate someone by what you think they can do! cause they can prove you wrong! = = = red riding hood the movie: = Valerie is a young woman who lives in the village of Daggerhorn, on the edge of a forest plagued by a werewolf. with her parents. She is in love with the woodcutter peter but her parents have arranged for her to marry Henry Lazar son of the wealthy blacksmith Adrian Lazar. Valerie and Peter plan to run away together, only to learn that the Wolf has broken its truce not to prey on the townspeople in exchange for cattlestock sacrifices and has murdered Valerie's older sister, Lucie, whom Valerie discovers was the illegitimate daughter of Adrian, with whom Suzette had an extra-marital affair. It is also revealed that Lucie had a crush on Henry. Father August the local preacher, calls the famous witch hunter Father Solomon to help them, but the townspeople decide to venture into the Wolf's lair to destroy it. There they divide into groups, with one consisted of Peter, Henry and Adrian. Peter separates from them moments before the Wolf attacks and murders Adrian. However, it is cornered by the men and killed. The following day, as the people celebrate, Father Solomon arrives and reveals that, had they killed the Wolf, it would have returned to its human form, and what they slew was a common grey wolf. He also reveals that they've entered the Blood Moon Week, an event that happens every 13 years, in which whoever is bitten by the Wolf is cursed to become one as well. Father Solomon's men, led by The Captain isolate Daggerhorn and begin to investigate its people in search of the wolf. That night, during a celebration, the Wolf attacks and, while the townspeople rush to the Church (as the wolf is unable to step into holy ground), Valerie and her friend Roxanne venture in the village alone to search for Roxanne's autistic brother, Claude but are cornered by the creature, which telepathically communicates with Valerie and threatens to kill Roxanne and destroy the village if Valerie doesn't leave with it. The Wolf then escapes, vowing to return to learn Valerie's decision. During the encounter, Valerie notes that the Wolf has brown human eyes. The following day, Claude is captured by Father Solomon's men. Having witnessed Claude performing a card trick earlier, Father Solomon claims he's a student of the dark arts and attempts to force the frightned Claude to reveal the Wolf's identity. When Claude is unable to do so, Father Solomon locks him up in a brazen bull Roxanne reveals that Valerie is able to communicate with the Wolf in exchange for Claude's release, but he is already dead by the time the Captain opens the bull.

language: now a days english like not olden day

purpose: to entertain and possibly give a bit of fright to younger viewers or readers!

form: fairy tale that's been acted out by people to remake the old story an to entertain

style: modern and may scare little children! so better off for older kids like teenagers and adults :)

moral of the story: once again don't talk to strangers :)