Fin

Hi Fin! Welcome to the wiki! I am very glad you made your way in, don't forget to write down your passwords and usernames. I am very confused as to which parts of the summary are your words and which parts are copied from the internet? Could you please distinguish between them for me? Is this a fairy tale or a fable? Excellent work with the other conventions! See you next week. Cheers Mel. Ps - if you want to move my comments to the bottom of your wiki then please do!

NONE OF THESE WORDS ARE COPIED FROM THE FUCKING INTERNET!!!!!

The fairytale "The Hare and the Tortoise" is not an interesting story. It has been written and rewritten, read and reread so meny times it has lost all meaning. Even though it (insert age here) years old the story has stayed the same, Hare has big ego, Tortoise challenges Hare, Hare falls asleep in race, Tortoise wins, Hare learns lessen. The moral of the story "slow and steady win the race". The story is aimed to little kids (5 or under), witch is probably the reason why I think it's boring. The story is in the form of a fairytale and it is imaginative. The language in the story a.k.a. the way the story is written, is very simply because, like I said before, it is written for small children.

This version of the story is more realistic and modern. In //this// version of the story/fairytale the Hare is represented by a human called Jack and the Tortoise is represented by a human called Terry. There are no talking animals and no race. Instead of there being a forest there is a office that Jack (the hare) and Terry (the tortoise) work at.