Owen

Hi Owen! You have done some really fabulous work here! I would love to see a little more detail, as you write very well. Don't forget to edit you work after you have finished and check for capital letters and full stops. Do you think you will add some pictures? See you next week. Cheers Mel. Ps - if you want to move my comments to the bottom of your wiki then please do!

Little Red Riding Hood

Little Red goas in to the wood walks in to the wood and tells the wolf where she is going, the wolf beets Little Red to grandmas house and eats her all up, he puts on the grandmas cloths and waits for Little Red LIttle Red walks in and talks a bit to the wolf and gets eaten. the woodsman comes in and cuts the wolfs Stomach, freeing Little Red and Grandma Little Red gives Grandma the wine and bread. a few days later Little red decides to go back to grandmas house. red riding hood and grandma killed the wolf by trapping him

little red riding hood and the wolf by Rhoald Dahl the Rhoald Dahl version is a revolting rime where little red kills the wolf with a pistol that was in her nikkers. the wolf finds little red and asked where she's going he beets Her to grandmas house and eats grandma and puts on her cloths little red comes in to the house and finds the wolf, shooting him there freeing grandma and they all lived happily ever after.



The Hare and the Tortoise we read 2 versions of the Hare and the Tortoise. one was a race the other was in a company, the race (the one we all know) the hare takes allot of rests so the tortoise wins the company