Ruby

= Little Red Riding Hood =

The story of Little Red Riding Hood is about a girl that is about 10 years old. Her mum sent her to visit her grandmother and gave her a peice of cake and a bottle of wine because her grandmother was ill. Little Red Riding Hood went through the woods even though her mum warned her to always stay on the path. While Little Red Riding Hood was walking she met a wolf, a big ugly wolf. She was not afraid of him at all, she didn't know that he could eat her or that he was up to something. Little Red Riding Hood got to her grandma's house but the wolf had already been there first. He had eaten the grandmother and dressed up in her clothes and hopped into the grandmother's bed. Little Red Riding Hood knocked on the door and 'her grandma' said "come in dear".

Little Red Riding Hood noticed strange thing about her grandmother

Little Red Riding Hood went up to her and said. 'Oh! grandmother,' she said 'What big ears you have! 'All the better to hear you with, my child,' was the reply. 'But grandmother, what big eys you have!' she said. 'All the better to see you with, my dear.' 'But, grandmother, what large hand you have!' 'All the better hug you with.' 'Oh! but, grandmother, what a terrible big mouth you have!' 'All the better to eat you with!' And scarcely had the wolf said this, than with one bound he was out of bed and swallowd up Red Riding Hood!.



Factional, explorative = to inform and explain
"RED RIDING HOOD" 'MOVIE' Red Riding Hood is a movie, there is this small village where the wolf would attack when the blood moon is out, the main character is Valerie she is red riding hood, the wolf is someone that is very close to her but she doesn't know that she had a lot of people in her mind but she never would have guessed who it was!!! The village was terrified all day and night, when the moon is red every one would go and hide inside of their houses! The wolf would come and kill so many people! All the poor people have to suffer.... :( After all when Red was talking to the wolf she looked into the wolfs eyes... after she was so confused! she thought that it was her grandmother.! Then her boyfriend and then her husband that she was about to marry!! She got too confused!!! The poor girl didn't know what to do or what to say! after she knew who it was!!! she found out that its her.......................DAD!!! she never have guessed that it was her dad! after the dad attacked and had bit her boyfriend! so that means that her boyfriend is going to turn into a wolf! she got so scared... but before that the boyfriend had killed her dad!! he had to or else her dad would have taken her from him!! so he just killed him! the boyfriend had to leave because his a wolf... :( the girl said that she will be waiting for him... but then after a while he came back for her he had learn how to control his anger and his hunger! and then they live happily ever after...!!! <3 <3 <3

Factional, explorative = to inform and explain
= LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD AND THE WOLF =

// Roald Dahl wrote another version of the story Little Red Riding Rood. It was a poem, some of it doesn't really rhyme but it has a humour in it and its kind of the same as the other stories, but it has a different ending because she shoots him with a gun, in the original story there is no gun with her and they also made a furry wolfskin coat thats also different than the others. //

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Great work summarising the story!

Remember our discussion about tense? Could you go through your summary and check that you have always used the past tense? Examples of past tense are; was, were and had. Remember that past tense is 'in the past', it really confuses your audience if you keep switching from past to present tense. Present tense is in the now, examples are is and has.

Give it a go, we can go through it next week if you would like to.

See you next week.

Cheers Mel.